Magnus Kortelainen
Tom Weber
Audit of the
Research Dossier by Stéphanie Biasoli
Emmanuelle Legeai
EU-US Relations in a globalizing world:
competition or cooperation?
I. Introduction:
This audit attempts to analyse the
research dossier on the EU-US relations entitled “EU-US Relations in a
globalizing world: competition or cooperation?”. The dossier is particularly
interesting since transatlantic relations have been deeply altered in the last
two decades. In fact, several conflicts both of economic and political nature
have divided the two historical allies. Transatlantic relations are marked by
higher tensions today, the European Union no longer being the small brother of
the USA and trying to become more autonomous.
The dossier intends to be ambitious
since it tends to treat the subject globally. To this end, however, many very
different topics need to be considered, which makes the dossier too
all-encompassing thus lacking a clear focus.
II. Complete
Inventory:
The dossier is based on two main
parts, the first one being a general overview, the second insisting on the
growing conflicts in transatlantic relations. Its basic structure consists of
twelve texts, ranging from general information papers to newspaper articles.
The different topics that have been treated make the dossier rich in diversity
and give a general overview of the current transatlantic relations concerning
trade and security issues, as well as environmental and general problems.
III: Critical
Analysis:
1) Form:
From a strictly practical point of
view, the dossier can be criticised since the index does not include any page
numbers or links that would allow a comfortable access to the different texts
and/or subjects. Moreover, the dossier is hard to read since the different
subjects are not sufficiently highlighted. Different fonts and font sizes would
have helped making it more accessible and coherent.
The authors’ choice to separate the
dossier into two main parts is questionable. It does not clearly illustrate the
fact that the dossier is actually treating three or four main topics, which is
to say: the political relations between the USA and the EU, trade issues,
external affairs and general questions such as the Kyoto protocol. In our
opinion, a subdivision into four parts would have been more suitable for the
outlay of the research dossier.
The commentaries are useful, and
help getting a better overall view. The source indication is generally well
presented although some sources can be called into question. We will detail
this point later on.
In general, the vocabulary is well
done since the key words have been clearly highlighted in the text, and the
different terms are recapitulated in alphabetical order at the end. The
indicated research dossier model has been well respected. However, the
summaries are apparently supposed to be of a different length in the English
and in the French versions. The authors simply translated the English version
as such.
In our opinion, the introduction
does not prepare the different subjects that have been treated. The missing
transitions between the various subjects make the dossier hard to follow since
the topics are mostly not interrelated.
The conclusion being based on a text,
it does not really manage to reassemble the different ideas, and therefore
fails to “widen” the dossier’s main subject.
2) Contents:
The dossier clearly shows a lack of
coherence between the very abstract first part and the more issue-orientated second
one. The introduction should have insisted more on the authors’ choice to treat
transatlantic relations beginning only in 1990s. A brief historical summary
would have been helpful to understand current problems in EU-US relations. In
fact, the third text, entitled “EU Relations with the United States; EU Guide
For Americans, Chapter 5” could have served as an introduction, since it
summarises all the different issues treated afterwards.
Most of the texts in the first part
are simple declarations of intent without any binding force and therefore
simply show the theoretical context of transatlantic cooperation.
The sources used represent a wide
range of internationally recognised references such as the International Herald
Tribune, the Financial Times or the BBC. Moreover, the authors try to make a
critical analysis of most of the sources. Nevertheless, and as we said before,
some of the sources are questionable. As a matter of fact, when introducing the
fourth text “Fact Sheet: Trans-Atlantic Business Dialogue”, the authors claim
that the working paper of the EU commission can be considered as being
“impartial and realistic”. In the third text however, the authors pretend that
their source “is reliable but [they] … do not expect it to be very critical as
it is an official web site”. This obvious contradiction shows a certain lack of
methodological coherence.
A similar problem can be observed in
the commentary on the second text. Indeed, the authors conclude that “the 1990s
appear to be a decade of rupture” although the entire first part addresses the
cooperation between the USA and the EU, without explaining why this rupture
occurred in the 1990s.
The so-called “useful links” at the
end of the dossier are a very good point since they enable readers to go beyond
the subjects treated and verify the information given.
Conclusion:
The information provided by this
research dossier is very interesting and ranges wide. The subject is certainly
very crucial and topical. Unfortunately though, the question raised in the
title – which is to say whether transatlantic relations are competitive or
cooperative – has not been answered sufficiently. But given the complexity of
this subject, one might ask if this question can be answered at all.
The subject is well treated and
complete, but some points should be improved, especially concerning the
introduction and the conclusion in order to make the structure of the research
dossier more comprehensive.